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Love - A 55 Fiction
Love, *Conditions Apply!
“I love you darling, but…” It disturbed Ravi, the ‘but’. Two years ago, he had left everything for his love. The same love was betraying him today. The end had neared. After having fought against the society for so long, Amey’s sorrowful words pierced through Ravi’s heart, “…I have to go back to my wife!”
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35 comments:
Nice as always, You have perfect blend of humour, sarcasm and Truth.
I already told you it's awesome, didn't i? The suspense was shockingly humorous.
All the best to us, the rodeo writers! Hope, we win! :)
U created real suspense with 'but' in 55-words :)
All the Best!
Hey awesome write up. You are writing really well.
Keep Blogging
excellent.. loved the twist!
oh nice nice..sad and funny at the same time..good luck :)
First the but... and then the twist, :D:D a wholesome package of a 55er, good luck Pooja :)
That was totally unexpected! Going on and sharing this with friends...
Hey a nice one.
Came here through Saurabh's tweet :)
Hey a nice one :)
Sad and good :).
hehehehehe.......
Terrific! :)
All the best! :)
lol... that was one hell of a 55er... at first in thought its the usual clichéd stuff and then when I read the last line, I was like wow! amazing...
keep them coming!
Cheers!
Tavish
Pooja,
Truly amazing tiny story. Didn't expect that last line '“…I have to go back to my wife!” Absolute shocker of a climax.
All the best to your team for BPL.
Cheers!
Vamshi
real gud one.... 55ers are always the best way to finish the message! followin yu :) and addin yu up
I have a friend called Ravi I wonder How he would react! :-)
Hehe.. go back to "wife".. Amazing twist at the end. Loved it
@Praveen Thanks a lot for the encouragement! :)
@Nethra - Thanks a ton sweety. Yes, we will win it! M positive enough! :)
@Dhiman - Yes, the 'but' was meant to create suspense! :P Thanks ton! :)
@Vijay - Thanks a lot! :)
@pal - Thanks a ton! :)
@neha - Thanks dear! :)
@PNA - That meant a lot! Thanks a lot for dropping by! :)
@Saurabh - Thanks a lot man! :)
@Yemiledu - Thanks for dropping by :0 And thank Saurabh too for sharing this! :)
@Harini - Thanks a lot dear! :)
@Advaita - :P
@Sree - Thanks a ton for dropping by and for the comment! :)
@Tavish - Thanks a ton! That meant a lot! Liked your poem too! All the best to you! :)
@VK - Thanks a lot ya! I am happy the suspense was liked! :)
@Hary - Thanks a lot for the comment and for following :)
@Venky - Haha.. *all characters were fictitious and any resemblance to any person living or dead was purely co-incidental* :P Thanks for dropping by! :)
@evanescentthoughts - Thanks a ton! M glad you liked the suspense! :)
You have this capability to breathe in life to your 55ers, but you know I'd still say the lesser words you use, the more beautifully expressive you are!
"…I have to go back to my wife!"
Pointed out a line in your last 55er too, I guess you should try a 5-10er sometime.
Loved the post, though it's so GAY! :P
Keep writing! :)
Hidden...in love with me and life! :)
Thanks a ton Sourav! And thank you so much for the encouragement! Even you should try a 55er some day :)
Am not so much a 55 fiction person . But this was cute and suspense filled ..
Like your writing . Will sure Come bck to read more of your stuff
nice post !!
loved it :) :)
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