Nov 22, 2009

Falling in LOVE..!!

This one was the first concrete poem I ever wrote some 4 years ago.. Being very emotional at heart, I penned this one down when I realized what's love.. When I read it today, I chuckle owing to the innocent childishness the poem possesses.. Yet, its purity still amazes me..

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Falling in Love is like a dream,
I want to, but cannot scream.

His name is etched on my heart,
To love him endlessly is on my part.

I feel, I'm on top of the world,

"I am yours", is what he told.

Trust is what he always asks for,

I'll give it to him, that's for sure.

Our love is as pure as the Ganges,

It will never die for ages.

One day when our hair turns gray,

All I'll do is just pray.

That when I take my last breath,

And come face to face with death,

It's his lap, on which i wanna lie,

And say goodbye to the world and die...

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8 comments:

Anoop said...

nice poem pooja... :D

√♪נ汉Ψ said...

nice.........poem.........keep writing and write more poems...
:)

adreamygal said...

very cute poem , typically childish.. but reflection of true feelings :)

NINAD...ENGINEER CUM POET! LOL!! said...

nice one...innocent!!

ALOK said...

hmmm...very good...nice poem..very meaningful...

Pooja Menon said...

@ Anoop.. Thanks! :-)

@ √♪נ汉Ψ.. Thanks again! :-)

@ adreamygal.. Hehe.. Thanks girl.. :-)

@ NINAD.. Thank you! :-)

@ ALOK.. Thanks! :-)

Nikhil Patokar said...

the emotions were clearly visible...sweet and true emotions straight from the heart....gr8 one...

Pooja Menon said...

@ Nikhil.. thanks a lot! this was an old one.. :)